Well hey there lovies, there are many new players among us and I'd just like to start the first thread of 2012 in hope that we can all have a little chat and, y'know, bond. -Waggles eyebrows suggestively.-
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Yeah, sorry, shoulda mentioned, we're basing this on the post for quality, not as Pride. ( He'll play a good Sin and an excellent Pride, I know him, he suits the character perfect--- ahem, I mean, he's, er. >_> )
Manipulations way of saying thank you was odd indeed, but Sadi was used to it. Mani was like the child of the group, the strangest and most childish except for Mason and despite the Sins apparent inability to love, he did very much treat those two in particular like little brothers. Mani’s words were met with a slight murr of approval and as both Harold and Mani moved away, Sadi cringed, he’d taken the brunt of that angels little trick and it showed when, instead of getting up, he simply rolled over and sat with his back to the wall, legs bent so he could rest his elbows on his knees and his head in his hands.
The Sin stayed this way in silence for a while, regaining his strength and the ability to think as the moments passed and it was only when he heard Harold talking to someone...nay, inviting someone in, that he looked up. Crimson pin points of light shining through a waterfall of black locks. “What did you just do...” he mumbled, pushing up from the wall as he spoke and for a moment he caught a glimpse of who and what Harold had been addressing. “Hypnosis...fuck.” was about all he said before warning his brothers, he didn’t call to them verbally, instead they’d find his voice whispering through their minds. Harold invited in another Angel... fair warning, but what Sadi didn’t know was that this angel was in fact pure of breed and rather more dangerous than anything any of the sins had faced before.
( Excuse the amount of time this took and how shit it is...I've had a rough day and night. )
Seil, a sight for sore eyes indeed. It had been too long since he’d seen this particular Sin and for a moment it seemed he could do nothing but stare at the ‘man’, something which surely had more to do with the blood which dripped from his brothers lips like venom. Something about blood was fascinating, it’s heat and texture when fresh, the strange jelly like way it clotted when left to cool and finally that dried up crust which stained everything brown and was hell to get out of clothing... it was fun to play with, and kind of fun to watch but of course Harold was the one to be given attention for now wasn’t he? Poor Harold.
“Awh, you and your best ‘bud’ no longer close? Such a shame, you’d think having been inside him would have brought you two closer not further apart.” Sadi’s comment was flippant in nature and almost dismissive in tone, because it was then that his dear sweet spoiled little brother rounded the corner, timid as always. “Angelic, I know, you could turn its skin into a mask if you’d like Mani?” the angel, it seemed, was being spoken about as if it were not even there and in a situation like this, were such a being was so very outnumbered, it really didn’t matter what the angel thought or said. “...and who said I wanted a piece of it? I came here for you.” it was only then that the most wicked of smiles spread across his lips and slowly he stepped forward, making sure to keep Mani hidden behind him and shielded as he moved, but his slow steady steps brought him ever closer to the Sin spawn...
Some form of confusion flashed over handsome features then, because, as he had been reaching out to catch his nephew the boy had fallen into his grasp? This he had not been expecting, Harold should have been stepping back, right? But no... it took only a moment for the Sin to realise what had happened, that rotten little cherub had used the light. A light which burned through the hall like the purest of white sunrise and left a wake of blistering, bubbling plaster as it went. The very cement which held this Mansion together was saturated in evil and that light burned the house itself as well as the Sins within.
It took a moment for the Sin to buckle, he was stronger than Harold, more resilient but finally the pressure of it pushed him down, but surprisingly, before he fell, he drew his nephew sharply forward, pulling the ‘child’ firmly against his chest as he spun to turn his back on the angel and eventually fell to his knees. Mani, if he’d allowed it, would be dragged down too and both sibling and nephew would find themselves partially shielded from that wicked light which licked at their flesh and souls like fire. Sadi, it seemed, was using his body to keep the majority of that god forsaken glow off of them both. Seil would have to look after himself, he’d been too far away and despite Sadi being one of the eldest and second most powerful of the sins that Angelic light left his head spinning, vision blurred and body screeching in pain, yet the sound which rattled out from scowling lips was not one of agony but anger. A roar, terrifying and truely hellish, which would follow the angel as he ran.
( Apologies for the time this took, my microsoft word froze on me... so had to type the damn thing twice. *Twitches.* )
There was always a weight in the air of this Mansion, like some thick seeping darkness which pressed against the skin and trickled through flesh and bone to a beings very soul but it had not always been this way. Once, this place had been nothing but stone and wood, built by humans and treated like a home – or at least most of it had been. Since Sadi had taken over the lease, non too diplomatically either, he’d extended the place outward, adding room after room and today it stood like a twisted palace in the night. Every wall soaked and streaked in blood, blood that had been washed away physically but the stench of death and evil would be felt by any supernatural being, it clung to every surface like a fresh coat of paint. Cobwebs had crept in over the years, their silvery grey tint lingering in the corners and the scuttling of god knows what else could be heard every so often, perhaps rats or other such critters had made this place their home? Yet, sometimes, it sounded more like nails scratching over the hard wooden floor boards.
Floor boards which Sadi was currently staring down at from a distance. Hm, didn’t gravity make that sort of thing impossible? Apparently not for a Sin, they could bend the laws of physics to suit themselves – not break them you understand, but twist and distort – which explained why the Sin was on the ceiling and not the floor, his body contorted at awkward angles and like some sick horror film classic he scuttled out of the darkness, coming from around the corner behind Harold so only the Angel might see his approach. His arms bend oddly, hands pressed palms down against the smooth shadowy ceiling, feet too placed firmly there. He was upside down, his chest facing upward to the ‘roof’, his back to the ground and that handsome face of his twisted backward as he moved, exorcism style, so he was staring directly at Harold’s back as he approached.
The faint pitter patter of his movements were all which gave him away, there was no crushing sense of power or evil, he kept that within for now, content to ‘sneak’ up on the hell spawn in moderate silence and once he was but a meter away he whispered. “Your manners went out the window when you offered this holy streak of shit help...” as he spoke he fell, body moving like a cat to spin so when he landed he looked elegant and deadly, instead of clumbsy and idiotic as it might have been if he’d misjudged. With a flick of his head he sent hip long locks of ebony hair streaming over his shoulders and out of his line of sight, focusing burning crimson eye’s on Harold... he knew his brothers would give the Angel the attention it deserved, for now he wanted to see his nephew. “Safe with you?...You gonna protect him like you did the last Angel which came here?” slowly he rose to his feet, brushing off seemingly non-existent dirt from his clothing – black shirt, black jeans, black belt, black, black, black... “How is our sweet Jesse by the way?” the most smug of grins flickered across girlish lips as he awaited Harold reply, it had been a while since he’d seen this child and he wondered if the wounds he’d inflicted were still fresh...
~His body fell limp against the desk when Gabriel pulled out, it was as if that cock which had been buried inside him had been the only thing keeping him up and when it was gone he collapsed and allowed himself to lay on the cool hardness beneath him. Despite how ‘hard’ he was acting his body was drained, mind a mess and in all honesty he just wanted to curl up and let himself recover, but no such luck.
The Sin didn’t even bother fighting back when he was dragged by the hair, he was too used to it happening by now and knew better, besides, the bed he was being thrown on looked comfortable, more comfortable than any desk could have been. “I won’t die, I can’t… unlike you, angelface.” he purred with a smile fixed to pretty lips before he was pinned again, but Gabriel would find the restraining unneeded. Sadi actually raised his hands, making it easier for them to be bound, and just smirked as the metal dug into tender flesh, It stung like a bitch but he’d felt worse, very recently, and this dulled in comparison to that.
“Don’t worry? Fuck you.” he hissed at the sight of that razor encrusted length, instinctively he kicked out at the stronger male, shoving his feet violently into the man’s chest, but of course it didn’t save him from what was coming. Nothing could, except perhaps God but that bitch wasn’t likely to help a Sin like him. A vicious growl fell from him when Gabriel spoke of taking a breath, but for once Sadi listened and did as he was told. His body relaxed for a moment and there was nothing but silence until the splash of blood.
Sadistic’s body reacted on its own, he found himself flung back on the bed beneath, body straining against the restraints causing his wrists to tear apart even more than they already were, but that was the least on his mind. The pain, dear god, the pain! It crawled up like some evil tidal wave and smashed everything in its path, the room spun behind crimson eye’s for a moment before he had to turn and lean that pretty head of his off the side of the bed. Vomit, a deep crimson and black, spewed from already blood stained lips as his body went into shock. There were important things down there, where Gabriel had shoved that thing so mercilessly and a few of those things were arteries and veins, Sadi could already feel his body weakening under the loss of blood. Hell, there was a steadily flowing stream of it leaking out onto the bed, pooling beneath the smoothness of his ass and tainting everything it touched a shade nearer to black than red. Blood always looked like that when there was a lot of it – an ebony pool.
Yet, through it all, Sadi didn’t scream, his body was shaking too hard and he’d been sick too quickly to have enough time for that and now that the thing was out of him the pain was leaking away, like his blood, to be replaced by a sense of draining. He felt like every bit of energy he had left was leaving him and if Gabriel didn’t do something, quickly, this host would die and all his fun would be over. ~
Just a quick heads up to let you all know I'll be gone from Thursday to Monday. Have fun without me, if you have any issues or there are any new members wanting to join talk to Dominance, Seil or Violence... hell, just do the whole voting thing and work it out from there. <3
Sadistic glared up at the angel with something brimming on hatred in his eyes, not because the blasted creature was making him feel dirty or violated really – he was a sin, he wasn’t easy to make feel like that and rape wasn’t going to do it. No, Sadi way just pissed off that he was in this position at all, he’d only wanted one evening of peace and what he got was this bastards cock. Not a fair trade, not at all. Though everything was pushed from his mind when the angel hit that sweet spot.
The sins head fell back in a wave of ebony that pooled around sculptured features like liquid night, his back arched away from the table and for a moment those long muscled arms strained and claw like nails scratched at the wood beneath them. Eye’s of fire had fluttered and bloodstained lips parted to allow a sharp exhale of pleasure. Gabriel had gotten a reaction, be it the one he wanted or not, and the angel didn’t seem to want to give the Sin time to recover because yet another shove was given and this time he had to bite his lip to stop the exhale turning into a cry.
“You’re not n…nearly good enough to make me scream, angel.” he growled back at the laughing man. The softest of trembles ran over his sweat tainted skin when he felt the other mans hands move across his flesh, it felt like spiders crawling and thought it wasn’t unpleasant.. Sadi didn’t enjoy it. No amount of pleasure, or pain, would make him enjoy being touched by any man. Not mentally anyway, physically he couldn’t stop his body reacting to what was happening and as pleasure shot like lightning from the tip of Gabriels cock and into him he tensed.
The Sins lithe frame winced beneath the angel, he may have been healed but everything still gave that dull ache and Gabriel was just too damn big not to hurt even when he was being ‘gentle’ “I prefer the pain.” he growled while staring up into golden eyes, neither admitting or denying anything – though if Gabriel pushed into his mind he’d find that Sadi was telling the truth, he enjoyed it when Gabriel hurt him, because then the angel was being sadistic.. and that was how the Sin gained strength, among other things.
When those lips came close to brushing his own the Sin tilted away, denying the angel the touch of his lips because it was the only thing he could control. There would be no kisses between angel and sin tonight, Gabriel may have been fucking him, but it wasn’t a two way thing – Sadi was taking it, but he wasn’t gonna make it easier.
Sadistic gave a sigh of relief when Gabriel moved away, not only for the space he was given but the fact that he was left empty. His insides burned with heat, mostly from his own blood and for once he said nothing at all in reply. Instead he spat yet another mouthful of blood over his shoulder and watched it drip down the wall beside him. A smirk spread across crimson stained lips, he liked the way blood looked, even when it was his own.
When Gabriel came closer and tried to force that potion into his mouth he’d find Sadi more than willing to take it, in fact he snatched the angels wrist as it came to pry his jaw open – stopping it from happening completely and instead leaned in so lush full lips slipped over the vile. Bright crimson eye’s looked up directly in the yellow ones above as he flicked his tongue down the length of the vial and over Gabriels fingers, a smirk tugged at the side of those seductive lips until his head was forced back and he swallowed the vial’s content without argument – or the need for force.
A pleasant almost ticklish heat spread through his body as the potion went down and even the crack of bones sliding back into place wasn’t as bad as it could have been without the rush of warmth that the concoction washed through him. “You can plan all you want, I’m leaving this place when you’re finished.” he smirked as his head was whipped back, he was waiting on the potion kicking in, in other ways: like restoring his strength, but it seemed he was going to be waiting a long ass time because the only thing he could feel was Gabriels lips on his jaw, then lower.
A growl echoed from his throat when both wrists were once again pinned, he could have fought back again, but his body still ached with everything that had happened and it wasn’t quite willing to do as he wanted yet. He jerked when Gabriel shoved into him again, biting his bottom lip to muffle the hiss of pain which threatened to escape, but with the tightness of that passage healed it didn’t hurt so much as it had before. Not to mention the blood that coated every inch of rippling muscles, which eased the thrust in and made taking him that much easier. “Nnngh, fuck..” he hissed when that length was buried inside as far as it could go, his back arched under the strain of accommodating something that big. “Do you get a kick out of hurting me, angel?” he growled as his body grew accustomed to the feel of what was happening, he didn’t like it, but at least it wasn’t as painful as it had been before.
Sadistic couldn’t stop himself from being tugged across the room, he tried to fight back but his body was refusing to do as he wanted – every time he went to lash out or break free an agonizing shock of pain rattled through him and when he was tossed, non too kindly, against the table his body gave out completely.
The Sin ended up sprawled, butt naked, across the hardness of that wood, his hair splashed around him like a puddle of ink, black streaks of midnight cascaded down his chest. He looked the perfect nightmare, if nightmares could be seductive. Lips of crimson, a river of red against snow white skin, framed by ebony strands and for a moment the Sins hellfire eye’s flickered as if something close to fear tainted their beauty.
The emotion vanished just as quickly as if had come and as Gabriel went for those long slender legs he kicked out, catching Gabriel’s shoulder with a violent kick before he was tugged closer and pain once again shot like lightening up his spine. No one realized how much broken bones hurt when unattended too and every time the Sin moved his body screamed in protest.
“Fuck..” he didn’t have time to finish before that cock was inside him again, pushing at his already torn insides and teasing yet more pain from him. “..Uhhh!” the sound was barely audible, but Gabriel didn’t need to hear Sadi anymore, he could see the pain on the Sins face and though Sadi wanted to stare defiantly up at the angel he couldn’t make himself look any longer. His eye’s fluttered shut, head falling back against the wood as he was pounded and every time Gabriel shoved ball deep his entire body ached and it wasn’t the kind of ache you could ignore either. No, there was nothing dull about this and when his wrist were pinned, broken one included, his steely self control shattered.
Nothing so pathetic as a scream left the sin but a cry echoed from him with every sharp shove of Gabriels hips that made his body rock, and the whispered words against his ear along with the angels continued rough treatment pulled a whimper from the man. The sound was something hardly anyone had lived to hear, and as soon as it fell from his lips Sadi got angry, an emotion that was swept away moments later by the sudden flood of pleasure which chased the pain. Shock showed on bloodstained features for a moment before the pain filtered back and overtook any sort of pleasure the sin had felt, and from the depths of his heart he growled, a low primal sound which reeked of evil. “Fuck you, Gabriel.”
An audible tutting noise fell from the Sins lips as Gabriel threw that contraption of his away, the sound of metal scraping against marble was like nails on a chalk board – unpleasant, and Sadi cringed ever so slightly at the sound and was distracted enough to let slip a grunt when Gabriels hand fell on the silky smooth exposed skin of his ass. The blow jolted him against the spikes and the remnants of the shirt which had clung to slender toned chest were shredded, yet that was the least of his worries. In fact, Sadi hardly even noticed the tearing of his clothing because Gabriel’s finger was distracting him. “I’d rather fuck a dirty knife than have your disgusting cock in me, angel” he hissed before rocking his hips away from the stronger male.
He may have been pinned, beaten up and in pain but he wasn’t going to take this easily, if Gabriel wanted to plunge that massive length inside his untouched body he’d have to work for it. Or at least, Sadi thought he would, but the Sin hadn’t been expecting things to get to that point so quickly, which explained why – when Gabriels thrust came – it was sudden enough to pull a cry from him. The sound was muffled by sheer force of will, but there was no denying the pain that showed on pretty asian features, not to mention the tightness that clenched at every muscle in his body – including those around Gabriels length.
In all his centuries, nay, millennia of life he’s never felt anything like this – he’d avoided this sort of thing like the plague and had been successful in keeping himself untainted by cock, now he was regretting it because even that first sharp thrust was enough to tear him up inside. Heat engulfed the angels cock, more than there had been a moment ago, and as he shoved in and out of that resistant hole he would find it easier and easier to slide in and out as the blood lubricated the way.
It may have made things easier for Gabriel, but Sadi was faced with an agonizingly sharp pain that twisted his insides and made him want to scream with every thrust of the angels hips. Without thinking he let his forehead drop to rest against the ‘bed’, only to be reminded that it was a bed of nails and as the pace quickened and Sadi’s body was flung forward, jolted and shoved with each passing moment his fight for control became obsolete. Yet it wasn’t pain filled screamed which echoed the dungeon, instead rage poured from between the Sins lips – he was furious and his anger licked outward in the form of heated energy which lapped at Gabriels skin and burned wherever he touched the Sin, including the insides.
It wasn’t long until that rage simmered down and finally the sin fell silent, the sharp pain of each thrust dulled and faded into oblivion as his body adapted to the whole thing, that sharp as a sin mind filled with endorphins and adrenaline, making it easier to take what Gabriel was giving without a sound – or almost without one, every so often a hiss or gasp would fall from the dark haired Sins lips, but they were quiet, muffled… and somewhat under control. ~
~ The sin gave nothing but a whimper as his wrist was snapped, but the moment the limb was released he coiled it back in and held it almost protectively against himself, cradling the shattered wrist tight until the sharp pain dulled and melted into a heated throbbing. When he’d been pushed back he’d dropped to his knees, and the movement caused already sore ribs to scrape painfully against each other – which drew a hiss of annoyance from Sadi, but even with all the pain he managed to keep his eyes on the angel. It seemed like a good idea to keep that one in his sight.
“Done it before… your torture techniques are old news.” he spat, almost sarcastically, when Gabriel pulled that oversized contraption from a drawer. Sadistic had made use of one of those centuries ago, he hadn’t been on the receiving end of it of course, but he had seen it in action. The memory of that girls screams made his lips twitch into the faintest of smiles and as he watched the ‘angel’ come closer a wicked smirk replaced the smile. “If you fuck me with that, I’ll bleed out and die within minutes… trust me, I know from experience.” he cooed, ever so sweetly, before being spun on the spot. His body fell against those spikes without any resistance and only the smallest of gasps showed it hurt.Gabriel was going to have to do much better than this if he expected to make this sin squeal, in fact it seemed like Sadistic willingly pushed himself onto those spikes.
Blood blossomed from beneath pointed tips and the feeling of punctured skin appeared to please the Sin rather than piss him off. Sadi may have been sadistic, but he fed off of all forms of sadism and Gabriel was enjoying this enough to give Sadi a taste of power, on instinct the sin focused that energy on his wrist and felt the bones slide back into place – not healed of course, but shifted so they could heal more easily and be less painful as they did. “You spank like a girl..” the sin teased… oh dear, teasing Gabriel while he had you face down on a bed of spikes with your ass sticking in the air probably wasn’t a good idea, but Sadi couldn’t
~ Sadistic couldn’t help but growl at the sight of angelic lips smeared with his own blood, usually that sort of stuff did nothing but amuse him, or occasionally turn him on, but tonight it made him feel sick. Why? That was his blood and Gabriel shouldn’t be tasting it, not without permission. Yet he didn’t have much time to think about it because Gabriel was moving again, toward him, and he had only a second to move. The sin blurred for a moment, moving at a speed that was staggeringly fast but not quite quick enough, the lengthy locks of black hair were snatched and as his body was forced backward again he mentally cursed himself. If he got out of here he was going to cut every fucking strand of that midnight hair off and use it to strangle Gabriel with. � “Ah, fuck! Will you STOP fucking slamming me against walls you cock sucking God loving son of a bitch.” he snarled between panted breaths as yet another flood of heat filled him mouth and overflowed to drip off pouted bottom lip. Every time Gabriel put pressure on his torso he brought up blood, the Sin was hard to damage but when someone managed it, the wounds took a while to heal on their own. “Ain’t you a perverted bastard.” he hissed at the feel of Gabriel cupping his pants and though the Sin was asian… Gabriel would find himself with a surprisingly large handful. Thought it seemed the angel had more interest in his shoes than cock and Sadi could guess why. “Hit you? I’d rather stab you… but you’re too pussy to let me keep a blade.” he smirked before shrugging. If Gabriel wanted to be hit, Sadistic could arrange that. He struck out with his right hand and delivered a devastatingly hard fist to the side of Gabriels face, hard enough to shatter a humans jaw twenty times over – easily, and if he’d hit Lucifer that hard even the Devil would have staggered, but Sadi wasn’t done with that, his left hand swung down at the same time and if Gabriel didn’t move, or react in some other way, he’d find himself not only with a sore face but sore balls too. Sadistic was a Sin… he played dirty, it was in his nature and taking a ‘below the belt’ shot wasn’t beneath him. ~
~ His mind was too clouded by anger to even notice the angel grab his wrist, the very first thing he felt was the shelf and only when the bottles began to tumble around him did he really focus. The scent of alcohol snapped him back to reality, followed soon by the pain of being slammed into a wall. His hair flew out behind him like some midnight wave and a gasp left paled lips as he heard more than felt the ribs cracking like twigs under pressure. Out of instinct his body fought back, but even running on autopilot he wasn’t pathetic, his foot kicked out at a perfect angle and caught Gabriel’s knee, he was trying to snap that leg if he could and while one of his hands pressed against the angels chest the other went to rip open his throat. He had no doubt now that Gabriel was stronger than him, scarily stronger, but that wouldn’t stop him from fighting back, not even when he was left dazed after the back of his pretty head smacked against the wall, more than once. White stars erupted behind crimson eye’s and clouded his mind, making it hard to think or even breath as he struggled and finally the pain caught up with him. Or more to the point, the broken ribs did. A cough rattled from girlish lips and blood rose at the back of his throat, the crimson liquid dripped off his bottom lip and fell in a cascade of red down his chin, but the taste of his own blood was disgusting to him. With a smirk painted across ruby lips he laughed, pain rocketed from the broken bones but he ignored it the best he could and instead spat that mouthful of blood into Gabriels face seconds before he was tossed across the room. Sadistic hadn’t even noticed the change in rooms, he’d been too busy fighting against Gabriel to notice much of anything and only when his body crashed into that strange device did he take time to look around. A cringe ran the length of his spine, not only from the pain of being thrown like a rag doll, but the sight of what surrounded them, he was not looking forward to whatever Gabriel was planning and it showed in the glare he offered up to the ‘angel’. “Fuck you, asshole.” he growled painfully before forcing himself to his feet. It hurt, sure, but he pushed through the pain and stood there, staring at the blasted man who’d dragged him away from his peaceful run. If he’d known this was going to happen he’d have worn more weapons, as it was the only real weapon Sadi had on him was a butterfly knife in his left boot. “What now, prettyboy, you gonna bend me over and have your way? Fucking pathetic.” he snarled and once again spat the blood which pooled in his mouth toward Gabriel, hopefully it’d stain the bastards shoes. ~
~ The Sin simply watched with uncaring eye’s as Gabriel went on to tell him what his plan was and the only reaction the ‘angel’ got was the slightest perking of well manicured brow. An expression which just screamed ‘Oh really? Is that what you think.’ and the look didn’t falter, even when Gabriel came closer and let his final idea’s pour from wicked lips. In fact Sadistic allowed himself to be ‘man handled’ and didn’t so much as flinch when he was tugged closer by the waist. Everything about him just reeked of vague amusement, because that’s what Gabriel was to him – amusing. Only when he felt the intrusion to his mind did he really react at all, and it was all psychological and not physical, although the little attempt he made at blocking Gabriel from his mind was pushed aside with ease. Which told the Sin that seriously trying would be pointless, it seemed he was out gunned when it came to the mind so instead he’d use his physical abilities to get Gabriel – but not yet, oh no, not yet. Laughter filled the basement room, a wicked sweet sound which came more from the Sins insanity than anywhere else, it radiated off the walls and as he was slammed into one of them the laughter continued. His eye’s glinted with unshed tears of amusement and contrary to what Gabriel had probably been aiming for, likely fear, Sadi felt the opposite – or close to it. “You think you scare me? With your twisted fantasies? I’m Sadistic, there’s nothing you can think of which I haven’t already thought of myself, or done…” he purred, almost playfully, before that none too familiar burning sensation distracted him. He’d felt it only once in his life, and it had been sort of self inflicted – but the mark that he held meant more to him than any other thing on this planet and the moment he felt it being soldered away by Gabriel his ‘cool’ attitude broke. A growl, like no other before it, filtered through parted lips and the calmness of crimson eye’s ignited instantly. The very fires of hell itself burned behind Sadi’s eyes and his mind focused in an instant, a flickering glare centred itself on Gabriels back as he stupidly turned away and with a flash of movement the Sins body slammed into Gabriel. He may not have been as strong as the ‘angel’, but he was as fast as him, hell, Sadistic was as fast as God herself and he used that speed to barrel himself against the taller man, using every ounce of strength he had to push him off balance. Yet he wasn’t stupid, no, and he didn’t stick around long enough for Gabriel to grab him either. The Sin moved so fast it was a blur, darting away the moment their bodies collided and then back again – always from a different angle and direction, and each time their bodies met Sadi used those sharpened black tipped nails to claw at the ‘angels’ skin. Of course Gabriel could avoid some of those strikes, but not even God could avoid them all and sooner or later Sadi’s hand came away stained with blood. Gabriels blood, the scent of it filled the room with the bittersweet aroma of angels and the moment that ripe smell hit Sadi’s senses he gave up caring about what happened. His head spun with the bloodlust which sometimes took over men of all breeds and if he wasn’t captured by Gabriel already he’d lunge at the man, from behind, and wrap his arms about that angelic neck. His grip tightened and if the man entangled in his arms had been human his head would have been ripped off by now, but that wasn’t what Sadi was going for – instead his digits curved till each hand resembled a claw. He raked those sharp as razor nails across the angels throat and if Gabriel didn’t escape, or somehow manage to avoid the attack, the delicate skin of his throat would be shredded beneath those nails and a river of blood would flow down that masculine chest. ~
Grammar and spelling can be difficult to get your head around at times and though we appreciate how hard it can be, we do appreciate a certain standard of both in this RP. We are all Paragraph RPers which means posts like: * Walkz in, sits down, luks round, waits 4 service.* is not fun for us to reply to and would not be acceptable here. We have nothing against people who enjoy this type of RP it is just not our thing.
If English isn't your first language, do the best you can. If you are putting in a genuine effort and your posts are concise and written to the best of your ability, well, that's all we ask for!
- A lot of us use Mozilla Firefox because it has a built-in spell checker (you can download the latest version for free), but if you don’t want to use Firefox, Microsoft Word has a great spell checker built in. This is your typo-master speaking: notepad doesn’t have a spellchecker so won’t really help with anything other than double checking a post before hitting ‘send’, we all make mistakes and sometimes we just don't feel like proofreading [cough]. Which brings me to my next point:
- Proofread: Take a minute to read over your work if you can because spell checker won't always pick up a mistake if it's a correctly spelled, but not the word you intended to type.
- Commas are your friend but don't use them in excess. Do not, do this, because, a comma, is, usually read as, a mental, pause, and when you use, commas too often, it can get, pretty, irritating, to, read. See what I mean?
DO:
- Use punctuation when you can. - Spell things as best you can and use a spell checker. - Capitalize things like: Names, places and the beginning of each sentence. - Ask if you need help typing a post or don’t understand what someone else has posted. It’s not a sin to ask questions, it’s how we all learn.
An easy way to get a post out if you're not sure is to simply think as your character would: put yourself in their place. How do they feel, what do they smell, hear and think?
- Use sensory detail.
It not only enhances your post and makes it more pleasant to read, it provides information that people may get tired of asking for. An easy way to get a post out if you're not sure is to simply think as your character would: put yourself in their place. How do they feel, what do they smell, hear and think?
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~ Sadi growled as the angel attempted to spin around in his grasp and for a moment he held on, trying to keep the man in place but found, with some shock, that the damned angelic creature was stronger than him – or at least strong enough to break away when Sadistic was trying to stop him. “Son of a bi---fuck!” the sins voice flickered from arrogant annoyance to sheer panic. The heavenly realm was not somewhere a Sin should ever be taken and as the holy light that radiated from all around them assaulted his senses he couldn’t keep himself from crumbling. Crimson eye’s shut beneath that onslaught of white and his body fell against Gabriels, coiling into the man who’d taken him to this hateful place – not for comfort, but to shield himself from it. Pretty features pressed against the angels chest, using the large expanse of Gabriels torso as a shield to hide himself from view like a vampire would hide from the sun’s deadly rays. Yet he didn’t scream, or cry out, in fact he stayed completely silent until they vanished from that plane of existence and appeared in the basement. The Sin stumbled back when he was shoved but stayed upright and once he realized they were out of that ‘hellish’ realm they’d been in he growled, eye’s flickering open to reveal angry flaming orbs where the crimson had once been. “You’re not an Angel… Angels can’t do that shit.” he sneered, pissed off more at himself for misjudging this being than Gabriel. “Fuck you, I’m gone.” he purred and as Gabriel spoke of the basement being enchanted, Sadi’s body flickered in and out of focus like TV running out of power. After a moment the Sin collapsed, he’d put everything he could into forcing himself through dimensions and out of this damned basement, but to no avail. The sound of his knee’s hitting the marble beneath echoed and a groan slipped from parted lips at the realisation that he was stuck there, unable to phase out of his body or the basement at all. “No, your home reeks of angels and death, just like you.” he hissed before dragging himself up and with Gabriel’s back turned he was able to head for the door undisturbed. It was locked, of course, but that didn’t stop Sadi from slamming his fist into it so hard that had it not been enchanted too it would have broken and splintered beneath his fists like some delicate thing. Yet it didn’t break under that cascade of punches. Sadistic’s head eventually came to rest against the door and he paused, allowing himself to gain control before turning wildfire eyes to Gabriel. A smirk spread across rose tinted lips as he shifted to rest his shoulder on the door instead of his forehead, once again taking up the arrogant persona. He seemed to calm, his body relaxed and all of a sudden he didn’t look so much captured… as willing to be there. In fact, if someone was to come in they might just think this was Sadi’s house and not Gabriels. He seemed to claim it with the way he stood, confident and secure in himself till the last. “I hate games, so let’s skip that part… what do you want, angel?” he purred and once again his voice was that of seduction and danger combined, it dripped like honey from his lips and tickled the senses of those who were lucky enough to hear. ~
~ Sadi would have facepalmed when the other man began to follow if he wasn’t a Sin and didn’t do those types of things, but it’s how he felt. All the Sin wanted to do was have some time to himself, without the people of the world annoying the hell out of him but it seemed he was shit out of luck because Gabriel was trailing after him like some love sick puppy. A scowl creased once contented lips at the sound of the angels voice telling him he was going to be bothered, but the Sin ignored it, instead choosing to keep walking in the hope that the man would get bored and go annoy someone else. ‘ Sadistic… the sin holding an arrogant holier than thou essence about him…’ a sweet sounding chuckle rippled up from deep in his throat at that and for a moment he paused, though he didn’t bother to look back at the angel – he didn’t care enough to bother looking at him. “You should meet my brother Blasphemy.” the sin purred, amusement evident in his voice, but for good reason. If Gabriel thought Sadi was ‘holier than thou’ he’d have a fit if he ever met Blasphemy, Remmy was the be all and end all of Holier than Thou, which was one of the reason Sadi ‘loved’ him so much. It was just so damned amusing to be around Remmy most of the time, even more fun to wind him up and so very easy too. Sadistic wasn’t even close to holier than anyone, he was just an arrogant bastard who was used to getting his own way at all times. Another thing he was used to was not being touched without permission, so when Gabriels hand fell on the sins shoulder and spun him around a low primal hiss fell from the man’s lips. Crimson eye’s blazed to life and power drifted off of him in waves, the hand which touched Sadistic’s shoulder would be subjected to a sharp shock of heat and energy, enough to make the skin tingle and burn painfully – a warning to make him let go. “I would offer my name, but it appears you’re already aware of it. I do believe that puts you beneath me, I do not know, nor care who you are… and I’ll forget you, like so many others… because you are so unimportant to me you might as well not exist. Now…”with those growled words his body drifted from sight, the tell tail whirl of midnight smoke taking the place of flesh and bone. He reappeared behind Gabriel, only a foot or so away from the man’s back and fast as lightening his fingers laced through the taller mans hair, taking hold of those gorgeous ebony locks and without even the least bit of restraint he tugged that head back, bowing the angels back till the back of his head hit Sadi’s shoulder. His other hand reached around to curve long digits around the stretched expanse of Gabriel’s neck, black painted nails pushing into the pale flesh to the point of almost drawing blood. “…pay attention, Angel… you may acknowledge me, but I don’t acknowledge you and if you ever, ever touch me again without permission I will take your soul and drag it to hell. Understand?” he purred, oh so viciously, against the angels ear and as he waited for a reply his fingers tightened, making it harder and harder for Gabriel to speak, or even breath. ~
Wed Aug 29, 2012 2:03 pm
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